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made by alexandra on Jul 16, 2007

you say you want to know who i am but i am so afraid for you to …

you say you want to know
who i am
but i am so afraid
for you to see
all of my faults i have silently
packed away inside of me
like a closet
overflowing
my faults would come pouring out
if i opened the door
to my secrets
i could not escape the doubt
of their validity and
to this blissful state of unknowing
where kisses are all that matter
you would see my pain and
inconsistencies
you would see my inabilities
and i am afraid you would
disagree
with who i am

5 comments

Travis Morgan, Jul 16, 2007:

nicely done. We all have our insecurities so I imagine most will be able to relate to this.

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Ashley Wolpert, Jul 21, 2007:

I like this

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alexandra, Jul 22, 2007:

thank you both.

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Lady J, Aug 2, 2007:

very well put...thank you.

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Bleeding Love or Drinking Hate?, Jul 7, 2008:

Straight forward with plenty of emotion. Very pure. Perfect poetry.

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