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aaron m. says:

a little some'n some'n i am working on. any feedback would be awesome to the max.

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posted Mar 11

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Becky says:

The character has been pretending to feel, to be human? And now the masquerade of feeling(s) falls away? The opening line is a little confusing on page one--"he thought his stoic and empty life was over" made me think that his life wouldn't be stoic and empty any more--but I think you are saying that the former life was stoic and empty before New York and now life has returned to emptiness. (If I have that wrong, apologies!) Maybe that's the difficulty of opening with a non-specific (is the term unidentified?) pronoun--"he could feel it slowly creeping back".

Other than that nit-pick, I really like your visual aesthetic and I'm looking forward to more pages.

posted Mar 29


aaron m. says:

becky,
thanks for the crit. its kinda late (after an 13 hour work day that is) and i cant think of anything else to say other than thanks..damn i need sleep.

posted Mar 29


Victor Von Doom says:

posted Mar 7


LAB! says:

if anyone has a short submission-style script they want to share, please let me know. i'm aching to do some pencils and i have a mental brick wall that's not letting me come up with any fresh ideas at the moment *frustration*

posted Mar 6


Rika says:

http://mars-1.com

personal fav, not comic art but still. amazing .

posted Mar 5


Qojak says:


i can't wait til i'm
done with this.

posted Mar 5

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Ray Frenden says:

Nice. I'm a big fan of your lines, so I can't wait to see the end result. Gonna vanity press it? I'd buy.

posted Mar 6


aaron m. says:

i thought i posted a peply yesterday...but i really like this as well. let me know and i would also be down for picking up a copy.

posted Mar 12


Victor Von Doom says:

Hello comic creators. I am stepping onto the internet. I have a website (www.doomescape.com) and it has pictures like this on it:



I publish a skateboarding comic book called "Skeightfast Dyephun" that you can see here if you wish :http://doomescape.com/SKEIGHTFAST%20DYEPHUN.html

posted Mar 2

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Ray Frenden says:

I really like your color choices. They share a sensibility with mine, so you automagically rock in my eyes.

posted Mar 6


Victor Von Doom says:

i'm glad someone out there is on the same page as me. i dig your style as well. the stuff on my ebsite has a lot of glaring color shit going on, like neon green and pink on black. when i was younger i absolutely hated neon and fluorescent colors, and pink especially. now i embrace them full hearted.

posted Mar 7


KriskiCorp says:

Clockwork is so unreliable...

But don't weep, you might rust.

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This is my first comic, just after I'd started using colour...
Hope it pleases the eyes

posted Mar 1

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MrGauky says:

Affirmative... bbbbzzzzzzzzt... peepers pleased!

posted Mar 1


Ray Frenden says:

Nice; good color choices too.

posted Mar 2


MrGauky says:

This is the last piece of sequential art I did...




I need to get into the habit of doing more?

posted Feb 20

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Ray Frenden says:

Lovely; your characters sit really nice in the scene. I have issues with that.

posted Feb 20


Shazam! says:

wow, thats tight

posted Feb 21


BISHOP says:

dudes, i've started updating my web comic again every tuesday...

check it out: girlvspig.com

posted Feb 1

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Ray Frenden says:

Woo!

posted Feb 1


Mal Jones says:

Yeah! Comics!

posted Feb 1

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Ray Frenden says:

Definitely; I'm going to use this place to bounce scripts and the like off of. I encourage anyone else to do the same.

posted Feb 1


BISHOP says:

COOOMMMICS!!!!

posted Feb 1


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