I really do love the site www.triggerstreet.com as far as screenwriting feedback goes. The problem is though, in order to get someone to slog through your crappy first feature, you have to earn credits by reading other crappy first features, and some of them make it really difficult.

I just read part of a script, ( that I am going to delete the assignment ), that is so freaking confusing that I just couldn't go on. It was only one paragraph too!!